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Spin

In the shadows I sit and wonder,
spinning round and over-under,
lamplight learing in my eyes,
to brighten up the darkest skies,
I whistle,waiting for the snow,
whilst watching silent people go,
about their business in the throng,
of muted travellers marching on,
and count my own soul lucky now,
i've found the reason why and how,
all I need is what and when,
to find I can return again,
but until then and for my sin,
I'll stay in shadow, sit and spin.

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  • hey charlie
    January 15, 2008
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    Great

    You've left me breathless. I love it, it's easy to follow, and it flows really well. Good job.