I want you back...
But it's obvious that you don't want me back,
I don't know how i can live through all the pain!
But i guess that I've had experiences on that...
You don't care about me...
And you never really have...
But i care about you!!! And i always will...
You've moved on... and I'm stuck in the past.
I think how it could have been
You think of how it is with some one else.
I've cut
I've cried
I've replayed it over and over again in my head...
It won't go away...!
I've sabotaged everything!
My relationships and my heart,
but
I've wiped my blood away,
and I've wiped my tears away...
But where does that leave me???
Broken down in the gutters...
Just like you wanted!
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So much pain, hurt and disappointment spills out from your poem. To feel such love and not have it returned is so unbearable, I feel your torture. I hope, in time you can move on and the wounds will heal. A couple of typing errors (hope you don't mind me pointing it out) but did like this poem. Take care, Julie.
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thank u for the help! no i dont mind u pointing it out that i had errors cuz i am the worst speller ever!!lol so its all good. i think i fixed them tho.
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Wow, this experience must suck! I'm sorry you have to go through all this. The poem is in it's early stages? I like the sentiments, but the flow is pretty broken up. "You've moved on, and I'm stuck in the past." My fave part. Check your spelling too babe, there's a few errors. Even so, I enjoyed it. Keep writing!
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thats my favorite part to!!!
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This poem rocks
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Obvious is misspelled. This reminds me of of my friends' high school relationships. Just reread back over it 'cause it sounds like it needs something else but i can't tell what it is.
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