Love was a great dog.Love might be dead,but
was great.It might be sad,but it is true she
might be in heaven with other dogs.The placing
is sad,but true.Try to say something,but it is
true.This is how she died: she was very sick and
and that is how she died.It is sad,but I lay in peace.
Author notes
Sadness
A contest entry
- Kids Only (Pets) by any1.
450 points, ended January 28, 2008, 11 entries
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this is very sad. our dag lady got out and was gone for about 5 days...we found her at the pound. Somehow she had lost her collar. It cost almost $300. to get her out. I'm glad we got her back though. thanks for your entry.
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That's so sad! If I lost my dog right now I owuld probably die too.
Anyway, good poem! I like it.
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That's the thing with owning pets, they never outlive us, but the best we can do is remember how cool they were when here, great poem! good luck!
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awww thats so sad olivia. Thought it was very very good, keep up all the good work olivia!!! Miss u, can't wait 2 see u soon!
-M.S
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Awwe I'm sorry your little dog isn't with you anymore. I've had dogs that have died too. It's very sad and you miss them very much.
You are a really good writer!
SilverButterfly
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I can feel the sadness in your poem. It has a lot of feeling and that is very good. The only thing I could suggest is that you put in some well-placed line breaks.
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Aw- I'm glad you loved your dog so much! Great job, fantasic for your age! Not that age matters
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cute
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