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Moment

I wanted to find you
- I tried to.
But as you disappeared,
all I could grasp onto
was your scent.

I think you should know:
I look for you.
In every line
On every page...
In every word,
I dream of you.
Whoever that might be.

I tried to find you
- I wanted to.
But as you disappeared,
there was nothing to grasp onto.

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  • BeyondtheVoid
    April 11, 2008
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    Wow, really well written, keep it up


  • Violent Glass
    February 15, 2008

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    wow this is one of my favorites
    i love the way you put it together
    great write
    thanx for entering... really