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Keep Me For Eternally

On nights of darkness,
And days of light,
My darling you are there for me.

Your arms caress me protectively,
The whispers of your voice comfort me,
Kisses from the lips tell me love.

Keep me for eternally,
I wish to be lost in the warmth of your eyes,
To let the rest of the world just fall away,
And stay with you my love.

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This is about my boyfriend, who I love very much. I thought something short and full of my feelings for him would be the best way to describe my love, because it is too hard to put my feelings into more words.

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  • z etoile
    February 18, 2008
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    What a wonderful poem to your boyfriend! These feelings seemed to sparkle and shine in this poem!