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It's the terminology that gets me every time.

Abrasions traced on empathy
outline contusions and ruptured vessels.
Cracks appeared
as the gurney tumbled over.

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  • Naridill gold member
    January 16, 2008
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    Very nice choice of words - an exquisite piece penned beautifully. The end was awesome.