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The Hill

I left the house
i left my life
i left it all behind.
to see your face
your smiling face,
out on the starlight hill
i walked to the place
i walked out of space
time was standing still.
till i found your face
your smiling face
out on the starlight hill.

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  • PatheticKt
    January 15, 2008

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    a simple piece yet quite touching to the heart.
    'your smiling face
    out on the starlight hill.'
    now those lines made this poem simply sweet ^^