rainbows glisten from my tears
painting vistas of sadness
throughout my
forgotten dreams
I loved you
and I set you free
with a wish
that you will find
the happiness
you could never find
with me
In a list
A contest entry
- Tell Someone You Love Them by XxGoldenxXDawnxX.
300 points, ended January 29, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Everything about this speaks loudly. The title, the picture and your words Mum
It rings true that saying if you truly love someone, then set them free.
Beautiful words you have bought forth Mum
Cin
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very generous of spirit, and magnanimous. good luck xx
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Oh wow! That is certainly the biggest gift of true love anyone could give. This really brought a tear to my eye. Oh to be loved so so much.
A beautiful write indeed. All the best in the contest
gaylene
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Sad...few words that say so much
Well penned sis 
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Wonderfully Penned
Sad but is wonderfully written
your feelings show through.
best of luck to you.
Riftkin -
this is beautifully written auntie with deep heartfelt emotion in it which the reader can really feel as they read it. well done and keep penning and i love you auntie
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This is lovely. Sad, but lovely.
Good job
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