(challenged submission)
cool contentedness
not longing to be the sea
pebbled centuries
myra 2002
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Written February 2nd, 2002
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This is absolutly beautiful, This is beautifully written. wonderful flow of words. The detail is awsome.
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Pure
"Not longing to be the sea"
"Pebbled centuries"
-gentle, yet thought provoking lines, a pleasurable read.
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Nice
Sweet to the point short verse poetry.
You say so much in so few words, you rock!
Much love sweet soul, Thanks for sharing you~
-Timothy
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excellent
awesome job. This was a very good haiku. Keep up the great work....*Jamie* -
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makes you think, makes you looke deeper searching for what it means -
Thank you for reading, Monkie.
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don't touch it!
'pebbled centuries'................... interesting thought.
Monk -
I have read your work, sheshe ... you are a sensitive soul ...thanks for visiting.
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wow!!
i love haikus
a have like 10 or so,
if you are willin to read them sometime,
thanx for sharing!!! -
How on earth could you comment so quickly, Walter! It is unbelievable! But thank you so much for reacting.
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'not longing to be the sea' good line
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