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Gaurdian Angel

guardian angel, give me light
give me song
to brave this night.

the rain is pounding, ever stare
pouring pouring
feathers flare.

i look in shadows, the waters edge
angels swift
to heavens hedge.

quiet

quiet now, how the window breaks
how looking through the torrent shakes
how mazes drip
and silence ships
sinking sunrise those beauty waves take.

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  • De-Throned
    February 10, 2008

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    wow this is really good. I love the rhymes and the last stansda is amazing keep writing bro.. and add me to your freinds give me some feed back... u know me lo


  • Candy6
    January 15, 2008
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    Great write. I love reading about the guardian angel.