Open heart’s wings
float on heaven's breeze
Drink fountain’s joy
God’s essence...
Breathe in bliss
peace blossoms
soul's petals dance
joys serenade mind
excelling eternity's sunrise
kissing a smile in you
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest by penman.
525 points, ended January 16, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Humm..i love the magical immagery you weaved in the words of this small yet a very vast expressive poetry..thanks for such a wonderful piece..well done...
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well worded...short yet well performed...the words are light and lift u like a pleasant breeze,,
Breathe in bliss
peace blossoms
soul's petals dance
joys serenade mind
excelling eternity's sunrise
kissing a smile in you
luved the way u ended..
cheers!!
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Congrats on the HM!
Lovely imagery portrayed in so few words. Great read. Congrats on the HM! -
Liked certain lines more than others, flow was off, great imagery tho..over all the piece wasn't too bad...
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Wonderful
Very nicely done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Very nicely worded. Good piece
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