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Insomnia

 

   Dementia grips

   sleepless minds.

   But bullet wounds

   through broken numbers

   don't kill time.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    January 27, 2008
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    Loved the shortness and dark feel to it. Great job.
    Good luck

    **Ktulu Blackwolfe**


  • Naridill
    January 16, 2008
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  • Exodus gold member
    January 16, 2008
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    Oh! Oh Oh OH!
    Yes.
    I love it!
    Thank you