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Green Rose

I smelt the rose
The rose objected
Cut me with her thorn
Never smell the rose
When the rose is dressed
In all her greenery

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  • Mark McNulty
    April 1, 2008

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    Another wonderful poem.

    The author of this work, Allan James Saywell, truly deserves to be given credit for his talent and skill.

    He wrote an excellent poem.

  • Janie5
    February 18, 2008
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    Very good write.

  • cindy4
    February 15, 2008
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    Nice write


  • andywontdie silver member
    January 16, 2008

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    Haha, I almost see some innuendos here. I like the part about the rose objecting, makees me think of the roses and flowers singing in Alice in Wonderland. Good stuff.


  • XxTearsHaveFallenxX
    January 16, 2008
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    nice job julia


  • Dmonik
    January 15, 2008

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    Short, sweet and simple. Makes sense too...get too close to beauty, and you get hurt. Nicely done Julia.

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