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Wrinkled hands and faces

She waits
for distance stretching forward
that mirrors what lies behind
in technicolour

A contest entry

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  • Exodus gold member
    January 16, 2008
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    A slightly bizzare take on the prompt, but you make it work well and flow nicely. Thank you.