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Hurry up, you'll miss your cue.

You weren't the type for tears
but then, begging is only a performance
and you should have won an award.
It wasn't the carpet burns I objected to
but the falsity of it all.

I shouldn't have to explain why
but then you never asked.
We both knew the reasons;
it wasn't me, it was definitely you.

You know, I wasn't sure at first
but I guess now I can understand
you were a one night stand
that lasted a year and a half.



A simple replacement can't mend a broken heart.

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  • Isabel Cult
    January 16, 2008

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    Ooh that's brilliant! I especially love the first stanza.
    And em...

    *Insert several paragraphs of complimentary, yet honest critique*

    Yeah...

    Lovin ya <3 <3 <3