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Cut Me and Let me Bleed

Cut me and let me bleed
Let the emotions fall where they may
They are a driving force within me
Let the blood pour
It's not pure blood
But tainted, cancerous.
Cut me again
Let me bleed
Let the pain pour out
And out
No more within
Let the blood pump pure
Let the wound be cleansed
Let the balm be applied
By the same hand
That weilds the sword (scalpel).

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  • Velvet Rose Petals
    August 30, 2008

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    Let pour out of the hole in my soul what will

    i found that statement to be a bit awkward in the way that you worded it. But definitely a beautiful poem and good luck in the contest..
    Rose