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Unearthly Vistas

She reaches within.
  Colors spew forth.
    Creating vistas
      unearthly breathtaking.

Hues so vivid,
    they defy
      mortal eyes.
      Piercing the soul.

In a list

A contest entry

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    January 16, 2008

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    OOOH very nice take on the picture.
    Thank you for entering my contest.


    Delila


  • Shakes-spear
    January 16, 2008

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    Very nice

    Some times few is better because it lets the reader fill in the blanks. This write is full of great things. You are a very good writer and I'm proud you let me be in your family! The Shaker