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Ours Alone






From deep within the wellspring of the soul
bursts forth a tide of love.
Joining with the ebb of sorrow,
it glows with light from you.
Exploding in a firestorm of pyroclasmic light,
drawn back into the womb of warmth,
and settling comfortably against you,
I wonder if only we are experiencing
the joy for eternity to enjoy.




©2008





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Written for the contest: Prompt Contest by penman
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2386175

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  • penman gold member
    January 16, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest