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Did You forget? "The Promise You Made."

From your heart, your feelings will go.
My internal pain... my heart's going to implode.
Take my hand...
And hold me tonight.
Sleeping in your arms...
...I feel everything's going to be all right...

Kiss me one last time, before you go.
I look into your diamond eyes...
...I love you so...

And do you honestly love me?
Because I can't get you out of my head...
My thoughts are so chaotic...
I think i'm better off dead.

"No you're not..." He whispered.
Behind his soft lips.
"I'll always love you... and I shall never forget."
"I'll keep my promise, deep within my heart... but for now, my love... I must depart."

I woke up... and he no longer was there.
I can still smell his scent lingering in my hair.
I can feel his soft lips pressing against mine...
His fingertips running down my spine...

"The Promise you made..."


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  • LoveDeprived
    January 20, 2008

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    this is awesome.. claps claps claps..
    i love this line..
    Take my hand...
    And hold me tonight.
    Sleeping in your arms...
    ...I feel everything's going to be all right...



  • VampyreGod
    January 17, 2008
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    Aww, baby ^^

    This isnt about us, is it?


  • InMyFlames
    January 15, 2008

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    great poem beautiful start: "From your heart, your feelings will go.
    My internal pain... my heart's going to implode." well done