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Floating

Partials of dust

etch designs

in dirty fishtanks.

 

She slumbers;

an imperfect mermaid.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • These Wasted Years
    January 15
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    Congratz on the gold!

    [♥]Nicotine.

  • PerfectImperfection
    January 15

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    Very unique take on the prompt here! Great use of imagery in such few words! Congrats!


  • Cerulean gold member
    January 15
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    Congrats!
    Well earned!


  • Friday gold member
    January 15
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    ...
    I'm a little bit speechless.
    This is wonderful.
    Thank you.

  • Naridill gold member
    January 15

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    This was beautiful ~ imagery stricken and simply stunning. Nicely drawn from picture.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 15

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    Nicely done! Very creative and strong take on the prompt...Loved the first stanza...
    Best,
    mysrtic

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