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Floating

Partials of dust

etch designs

in dirty fishtanks.

 

She slumbers;

an imperfect mermaid.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • And Hyetal
    September 8, 2008

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    This was so sweet (mermaid). Reading this actually left me refreshed.

    I love your fonts, by the way. They always go so well with the poem.

    *takes huge breath*

    I think I'm done commenting.

    for now.

    o.o


  • Nicotine Eyes
    January 15, 2008
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    Congratz on the gold!

    [♥]Nicotine.


  • PerfectImperfection
    January 15, 2008

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    Very unique take on the prompt here! Great use of imagery in such few words! Congrats!


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    January 15, 2008
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    Congrats!
    Well earned!


  • Exodus gold member
    January 15, 2008
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    ...
    I'm a little bit speechless.
    This is wonderful.
    Thank you.


  • Naridill
    January 15, 2008

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    This was beautiful ~ imagery stricken and simply stunning. Nicely drawn from picture.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 15, 2008

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    Nicely done! Very creative and strong take on the prompt...Loved the first stanza...
    Best,
    mysrtic

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