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Can you cry underwater?

It's nothing but a seranade
played underwater
to drowning ears and bloodshot eyes.

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  • February Moon gold member
    January 15, 2008
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    This is amazing. Really well done. Good job.
    Chelsea


  • Exodus gold member
    January 15, 2008

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    Oh wow. Not only is the title interesting, but the power you've managed to put into your words is very intense. Thank you