Red Red River runs down my arm
Red Red River slowly drips onto my bed
Red Red River stains my sheets
Red Red River scars my skin
Red Red River hurts
Red Red River creates the tears in my eyes
Red Red River carries my painful emotions
Red Red River knows my deep dark secrets
Red Red River helps me with my problems
Or so I tell myself
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This poem does not appeal to me that much, but I can see the talent in the composition.
I also note that this poem appears multiple times on the internet as the work of Rebecca Barnwell. Certainly, she deserves to be given credit for her work. -
I like this one Julia. The repetativeness of Red red river emphasises the fact it's about blood, not an actual river. It's a powerful, thought provoking piece.
Keep it up
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sorry i forgot to give the points see yeah
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i really liked this
i really liked this poem bf good write.
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