Feel the dark earth on your face
Feel the blood run down your hand
His dead flesh
Why Me?
The World is cold
Good ?
Comments
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Great imagery here. Dark, and stark this is. Keep writing, you are good.
With
Dark
Love
Wayne Leon
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thats cool. I like it.
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Good imagery, this was a sad write. I felt if you lengthened it it could be better though.


