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Wind Of Light

God's divine breath
In banquet of magnificence
Paints my soul's passion
absorbing wind of light essence
blissfully quenching my thirst








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Artist is: Melonie Weidner
Picture Title:"Open Spaces"
Website to other beautiful pictures: http://www.listenforjoy.com/prints.html

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  • penman gold member
    July 10
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    Excellent

    Such a wonderful write for the theme. And a great choice of 20 words. Thank you for sharing.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 6, 2008

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    So true and so effective poetry you did here my friend while describing the connection with HIM and that the truth of the every one my friend..well stated poetry...


  • delightfulmess silver member
    January 16, 2008

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    OOOh... Breathtaking... Liked where you took the pic. Thank you for entering my contest.


    Delila


  • starwing
    January 15, 2008

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    this was lovely...but i think devine..is spelled divine in this instance...LOL... and now i must go check out this contest... , peace and harmony...desi


  • penman gold member
    January 15, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Great take on picture. Best of luck in the contest.

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