Trembling on the cold hard floor
Eyes fixated on the door.
Waiting for the knob to turn
Making my intestines churn.
Living shadows pierce the dark
They're monsters who have made a mark.
They sneak and dance across the wall
Waiting for my guard to fall.
This is my life every night
As soon as I turn out the light.
Are they real, making therapists' blind
Or hallucinations within my mind.~
Author notes
I'm DarkenedAuras
I just saw Boogyman 2 and this is inspired by it in a way.
A contest entry
- Invite Only - My Favorite Rhymers by Frodofan.
600 points, ended January 31, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Cool and creepy! I think Tarja (another fav) would like this too! It actually reminded me of her a little for some reason.
It has the throbbing rhythm that's good for this sort of thing. Like a heart beat.
Thanks for entering!
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Loved the ending of this!This had a nice flow to it and was well written.Nice to read something from u after so long.Best of luck in the contest
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Quality
Very much so quality poetry as this poem is filled with a huge amount of talent hence emotion. Waves of shock from this awesome poem was something I never wanted to end. Unique as it is, you did a write beautifully done.
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