The sight of love cleanses the soul
When seen through rainbow-coloured eyes
It shadows the fear of the present
And eliminates the use of lies
The sight of happiness cleanses the soul
With imagery of deep-coloured love
It nurtures the heart through sense
Like the freedom of a beautiful dove
The sight of love cleanses the soul
With the aid of a pure heart
It aims for warmth and happiness
Like a determined and driven dart
The sight of happiness cleanses the soul
Through the wings of a free dove
It allows rainbow-coloured eyes
To believe in true love.
A contest entry
- Rainbow Eyes by amaranthine lover.
300 points, ended February 2, 2008, 5 entries
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Comments
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I like it, very interesting. However, line twelve stuck out, breaking the over all tone of the poem.
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this is pretty and lyrical sounding thanks for entering
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