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Oh Lord!!!

Oh Lord
Take me up to the highest peak
Oh Lord
Allow me to seek
The almighty Lord

I will follow you
Forever
I will love you like I do
Today

Lord you allow me to stand
Through all the peoples
Demand
I will stand strong because of you

I stand strong because of you
Oh Lord
I do
Worship you on every chord

Lord I let you seep into me
I am drenched in your love
You open up my eyes so I can see
Your love from up above

By: Molly Shepherd

Author notes

This is inspired by my fav worship song. Your Love is Amazing.

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  • fennywest
    May 27, 2008

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    Thank you

    This is a very good poem based on one’s relationship with God.
    It is a prayer that focuses on what God has done for the individual.
    I was however looking for an ode that focuses and praises God.
    Thank you for entering and I wish you the very best in your writing.
    Well done for being one of my finalists.


  • Frogzter gold member
    March 29, 2008

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    His love is indeed amazing as is this inspirational piece! Uplifting and praise filled. Your faith really shines forth in this write! Thanks for sharing and many blessings,

    Frogz~


  • stavykm gold member
    March 20, 2008
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    Beautiful

    Yes to be filled up with his love and to be able to wake up all over again for he is our strength on a daily basis stand and be there for the demands of many people. Excellent poem and tribute to our Lord. Thank you for sharing your gift to write poetry and good luck in the contest.
    Many Blessings
    Kelle Marie
    stavykm


  • Talking Toni gold member
    March 17, 2008

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    We Do Stand Stronger..............

    with and because of God and his unending love!! Thanks for this piece that also shows your love and devotion to him as well. Your desire to serve him shines through in this poem! Thanks for your entry and the best of luck in the contest!!!~~Toni~~


  • Irish Heart
    February 8, 2008

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    Nice write!

    This is a very nice piece! The flow is good and the almost simplistic part of it really makes this an inspiring poem. Nice write and good luck!

    Sincerly,
    Em

  • Liquid memories
    January 14, 2008

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    wonderful to love the Lord, for our salvation comes from the heavens, through his Son, Jesus. all the best my friend, and continue onward in your study and worship of God.

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