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Your Sweet Words

A single memory
To join the onward march
A love, little forgotten
That slowly breaks me down
And I crawl on my knees
To hear your sweet words
Truth is hard to avoid
When it's yelling in my ear
And the beauty, oh the beauty
Of the pain in myself
I would do anything for you
Even give up control
But expect the unexpected
For a love that returns
I am worn to the bone
Darkness fights on
And this love is returned
From the only one that matters
Who has hurt and abandoned
While forgiveness stands true
Yet the fear's taking over
Am I true for you?
Playing over and over
I just need to remember
There's no need to crawl
To hear your sweet words

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  • Onion Boy
    January 16, 2008

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    sorrowful?

    read from the point of view of someone that knows nothing about personal matters (i.e. Me) it holds a good message. I liked it, very much.

  • LookIntoTheAir
    January 16, 2008

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    Das ist so schoen. And I like the ending too,
    "There's no need to crawl
    To hear your sweet words."
    True dat.
    Ich liebe es sehr. =)


  • Skawe
    January 15, 2008
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    Oh Kira! ich bin froh fuer dich!