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What Has Hell Sent?

Something is wrong.
The shadows's bent
and too long.
What has hell sent?

Strange noise in the air,
it comes and goes.
It's over there!
It's a thing no one knows.

it's a sound,
a crack.
look around,
It's at your back!

It tingles your spine,
freezes your heart.
It stops time,
In the shadows a dart!

The eyes a blur,
a sirens lure
you scream!
Pray to some god,
it's only a dream.

Author notes

I've had this feeling lots, it suuhuhuhuhucks.

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  • LaPoetaSinLimites
    January 16, 2008
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    the same comment you gave me...but i like the rhymes a lot too