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My New-Found Friends

Hey, I found those things again,
Those things that wiggle to and fro,
All lined up like a choo-choo train—
They’re getting bigger as I grow.

They’re fun to play with by the hour;
They never, ever run away,
Not like the cat behind the flower,
Who hides when I just want to play.

On cold days, though, they disappear
When Mommy bundles me up tight
In sweater, hat, and winter gear,
With socks all toasty warm and bright.

But here they are! and this time I’m
Not letting go. That way they’ll be
Close and handy all the time
To be my friends and play with me!

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  • mommyof2
    January 15, 2008

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    Simply adorable...who better to write such an entertaining little children's ditty than you!
    Loved the rhythm and rhyme from beginning to end.
    Well done and best of luck.


  • HaleighGrace
    January 15, 2008
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    GREAT

    This is a great entry--I love it!!!
    HALEIGH


  • Jrokku No Hime
    January 14, 2008

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    Aww that was so adorable. It flowed really well and everything is so cute it makes you be filled up with smiles