Desiring nothing more than presence.
Wonder beckons as reality becomes.
Touch, simply mesmerises.
Intensity flows, pulses.
Pacing, controlling every move.
Loves musk dwells,
Floats.. and surrounds.
Eyes locked.
Breathing heavy.
Lips brush like snow against skin.
Melting instantly
Fusing together as tastes are absorbed.
Swirling deep beyond depths.
Fullness rises.
Orchastrated bonds rooted indefinately.
Flesh upon flesh, soul upon soul.
Spirit becomes sole.
A contest entry
- making love... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended January 23, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Passionate, intense and sensual. It also gets additional kudos from me, for having a naughty picture in it... Good work
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Swirling deep beyond depths.
Fullness rises.
Orchastrated bonds rooted indefinately.
Flesh upon flesh, soul upon soul.
Spirit becomes sole.
Ah..you witnessed the joy..and made us to see it as well..wonderful ...
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"Desiring nothing more than presence....Swirling deep beyond depths. Fullness rises...Flesh upon flesh, soul upon soul. Spirit becomes sole..."....*sighs* Nature rises to divine...beautifully rendered...Best of luck in the contest. Peace, Rhonda
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A beautiful piece Apple... imagery is potent with passion... wonderful metaphor, transcending all that is lust to become one with the spirit in the throws of a beautiful union.
A great piece Apple! Good luck in the contest
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Love it babe its beautiful it really helped me to visualize past and future moments of bliss mwa
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