The raven-haired beauty,
the Queen of the Deep
Her mournful siren songs in your ears seep,
baleful, and haunting
they make you weep
Eyes of Emerald,
her fair face does hold,
and her body is covered,
in a veil of gold
Her voice like wind
lulls you to sleep,
it's then she does snatch you
and you're hers to keep
For eternity and after,
You belong to the Queen of the Deep
Author notes
This poems a bit different, whatdaya think?
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie ~~~ Mermaids by Bosky.
450 points, ended January 19, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Kinda dark, but this describes a mermaid so well. Very great write, and thank you for entering my contest!
Always,
Cassie
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This was perfect! You did vey well, and it was very descriptive. Great work!
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