The light is closing
But I can see enough
Doorways folding
And there's still a way
I'm always walking this hill
But you're at the top
A pain of glass
Frames my world
Speaking without air
A love untold
It's always there
Author notes
Well, ok, a cheap rattle off. I had some great inspiration earlier, but it escaped me, thus is this.
Please tell me what you think
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this poem is good. thanks for sharing!try to find other thing to use as inspiration!!hope u find it!! much love!!
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Thank you! I hope I do! Ooh this isn't the soap in a fishbowl one. That mustta been a little later on that one. Anyways. Thanks!!!
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wooot another excellent write by you
You may be 20 but you'll always be the same loveable Christian to me lol anyway this poem is superb..whatever are u talking about? great inspiration escaped from you? this poem is lovely i like it lol...if a great inspiration leave me..i won't be able to write a poem like this...incredible you!
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