as all those lttle parts fall to the floor
i look down and see those memories I've discarded
the ones I didnt want
the ones I lost.
I see that night on the beach
when that rocket exploded
the blanket and your eyebrows were gone
I see that day at my house
when you came swimming
sneaking kisses behind dad's back
I see that last final kiss
before that good bye
that hurt so much more then the breakup
I see all of the hurt and all of the pain
all of the love and all of the shame
I see neveragain and foreverafter
those peices I lost though are just that
lost and now gone and forgotin
replaced
but as i look back those peices make a whole
a whole lot of lies and of nothings
i realize this now
that i was in pain and you didnt care
about me
Author notes
this is kinda like all my significate exes lumped in to one i dont know why the tital just made me think of it and like chopping off all my hair i wanted to get rid of them
A contest entry
- Come and get your title... by Celticjedi.
600 points, ended January 19, 2008, 26 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Whoa...
I like it. I like it a lot. It's like looking in a mirror almost, by reading your pain I can see my own. Very well done. There are a few spelling errors but that's no big deal. Thank you for entering, and please, don't cut off all your hair. lol
Great job, keep it up!
~Cj
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sorry i already did lol
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cute
jk its a good write ily i knew u would freak if i called it cute! no its good!
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