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Love Lust Life

Love.

It's a hurtful thing.

Holds life by a blemishing string.

Just when you think you can turn away;

the whole world begins to sway.

 

Lust.

To baffling to comprehend.

You can never seem to gain the upper hand.

It brings on so much pain;

yet what is there to gain?

 

Life.

The hardships never end.

Do they ever begin to mend?

It's always one thing after another,

soon, I will start to smother.

 

 

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  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 5, 2008

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    Very well Done Dear You have some talent Heck this is better than some of mine. Keep up the excellent work


  • FifthDove
    March 5, 2008

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    Nice write, I like how it is put together as if in different thoughts yet weaving all back together in the end with the smothering feeling.