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Nirvana

Pushing you against the wall
Pressing my body against yours
Ripping, tearing
Clothes on the floor
Kissing you deep,
As my hands seek your member
Taking it in my hands
Teasing, touching
So very gently
You're begging me for more
I move down your body
You moan when you realise
Just what I'm going to do
It starts with a gentle lick
Teasing and tasting,
Your fingers are in my hair
As I take you in my mouth
Slow and deep
You let out a moan
Moving faster over your hardness
licking, teasing, tasting
Your pulling me deeper onto you
Thrusting into my mouth
Legs going weak
As you reach your nirvana
Your juices fill my mouth
I taste then swallow
Finally, making it to the bed
To recover for next time.

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  • Evenstar
    January 18
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    very well written. i like it a lot. it's enthralling-like wow. lol.

  • Ishtar
    January 17
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    eeeeeeeeek. :S
    Someone's a bit randy?


    • Dancing Rebel
      January 18
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      That is the strangest comment I have ever received... i shall grant you that...

      • Ishtar
        January 18
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        It's a good poem, seriously. But they make me blush and make me stupid and I can't say anything but EEEEEEEEEk.
        and then accuse you of being randy.
        you know you are, miss Dan.

  • snow queen
    January 14
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    Very nice!

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