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Angel Restrained

Angel restrained eager to serve
Waiting in position, the sweet anticipation
Every breath tingling each nerve
Sweet submissive hungry for Domination

Senses engulfed making her wait
Nothing but the air for now her torment
My need to watch her I have to sate
My lil angel, calming the heat of the moment

No tender touch to awaken within
My toy for My pleasure she is tonight
Self controlled I don’t rush in
The timing of each caress must be right

So slowly I will awaken each feeling
Releasing each hunger and inner desire
Taking what is Mine, sending her mind reeling
My angel, My passion, My fire

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In answer to My angel's 'Ready to Play'

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  • Ms Lez
    January 18

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    WoW

    WoW!!!
    It's a wonderful poem. I feel like becoming "sweet submissive hungry for Domination". Thanks for being such a seductive mistress, hun!


  • ukelova
    March 19, 2008

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    Congratulations!

    Hello there!

    Congratulations on the gold trophy. Your poem is very deserving. I love the structure: the quatrains, the neat rhymes and the consistent rhythm.

    Vey nice.

    Have a celebratory day,
    BJ.


  • lilmizdiz
    February 19, 2008
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    WOW

    You really wrote a winner here! This is unreal as to the passion & desire. AWESOME JOB!!!


  • The Poetic Angel
    January 16, 2008

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    Congrats on the GOLD Jems M'Lady ... i'm so happy and Proud of You ...

    xxx Your cheeky lil angel xxx


  • Canis Lupus
    January 15, 2008
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    I like this a lot, it descrbed what I got from the picture! Well done.


  • Tattboyspet
    January 15, 2008

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    well done - I did enjoy this one - your capitals are in the right spot and the sentiment you portray is basically what I saw in this picture
    thank you for your entry


  • The Poetic Angel
    January 14, 2008
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    awsome Jems M'Lady ... You sure know what i want and need

    the background is perfik i love it

    good luck in the contest M'Lady

    xxx Your cheeky lil angel xxx


    • Corvus Corone
      January 16, 2008
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      I know what you want angel xxx what ya need could well be different but I'll learn ya xxxxxxxxx Jem xxxxxxxx

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