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Jade

Smooth green like the
imprisoned souls of a million springtimes.

Two beads of verdant color--
Demeter's eyes.

Companion to gold and silver and bronze,
and to its cheaper cousins, tin and copper.

Worn by the rich nonchalantly.
Worn by the poor proudly.

Nothing but plain old Kryptonite.

Author notes

Demeter: Greek goddess of nature.

Kryptonite: in comic books, a stone that is Superman's only true weakness.

Just in case some people didn't know.

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  • torn dragonfly
    January 16, 2008

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    Beautiful descriptions, loved the intense metaphors and how different people relate to jade! Great choice in stone as well =D nic write!