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Blow Away

When your sitting all alone the bills pile up,
the dog irrates you,
and your hope burns dry.

Your soul is waiting for someone to save you,
Someone to hold you.
Dreams are dying every secound.

Your life is circling around you,
like tommorow will never arrive,
and your breath is dying softly.

You ponder on what youve done,
what you missed,
who you hurt,
and why you ever messed up.

Guilt consumes your helpless mind,
and smoke blows it all away,

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  • honey bear
    February 15

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    a very sad write my dear friend i see that you havent been on for a while, we are all here when you need us making sure you will have messeges or comments for when you return x

  • hose30
    January 22, 2008
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    Wow spoken like a poet. This write was perfect. I almost started to cry.I know the feeling. life is not easy. But we have each other to lean on. I know this feeling all to well.I guess that is why it almost made me cry. Hold on and know I am here for you. Your brother JOe.


    • Truthful Princess
      February 26
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      How have you been?

      I am 12 weeks pregnant and me and the dad have been fighting a lot lately. Other then that, work is going great. I am about to get a promotion. I am in school.

    • Truthful Princess
      January 23, 2008
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      Thanks bro

      I love you!


  • Father G 23
    January 17, 2008
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    you

    are amazing!

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