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une nuit pluvieuse à Bruxelles

 

une nuit pluvieuse à Bruxelles

 

A cool rainy night

traffic and street lights sparkled

and everything seemed in motion;

 

 

seen by dim room light,

through gathering drops

running down window glass;

 

 

you stood sipping from a cup

quiet as the rain, away in thought

swaying slightly to soft sounds of Brazil,

 

 

and I wanted to know

the feel of you...

curve of your body  pressed against me,

and your face near mine;

 

 

Standing near, pretending to watch

lights and rain,

seeing nothing

past your reflection;

 

 

beauty on a rain spilled window

 

 

you met my eyes in the glass

and asked "what are you thinking?"

 

...et nuit dans Bruxelles 

 

Face to face

in the window glass

rain in the air outside

deep wide eyes that spoke,

and invited me;

 

“rain is different here…

not so out of place…”

 

You smiled at my diversion

and waited, as hips move a bit more

revealing love and music,

in silhouette to the window,

now city lights sparkle in rhythm

  

“ surprising really,

how much I think about  you…”

 

Not new to feelings

or presence of alluring women,

or even to moments like this;

thoughtfully savoring

someone.

 

Happy for the way

you fill my eyes,

linger in thoughts..

make me notice   silence.

  

 

 

  

 

 

 

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    January 23
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    wonderful story line! rainy nights can be so much more than what we think at the first sight...