Why is it so hard for you to understand
That all I really need is for you to be a man
Hold me
Hug me and
Love me
I don't think thats too much
Even when you have friends around and such
You tell me you love me all the time
But I need you to show it just a lil more
I am tired of sometimes feeling like I am just some whore
I need you to be there
I need you to care
I need here when no one else is there
Is that really so hard for you to understand?
Or is it just because you are a man?
Author notes
This poem was not meant to really have a scheme so please don't comment telling me how to write... Thanks!!!
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I like this. You did a good job writing out your feelings and thoughts here. You have done a very wonderful job doing this. You got your point out very quickly, you didn't just stall and wait until the end to say it. Great work! I love it! keep it up! anyone tries to tell you how to write, they can shove it. (no offense to anyone who does that... but to the people who do that to everyone and are complete assholes, yeah... you know what I mean.)
Crimson
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