It's hard not to wonder...
What I'd be like without you here
To hold me hand,
Kiss my lips,
To tell me you love me.
I often think of what I was like before I met you,
And I think it's safe to say,
I wouldn't be here if you hadn't come along.
I think about you day and night,
I daydream of you sweeping me off my feet and taking me away,
I dream of you kissing me deeply and staying with me forever.
When I see you, it's difficult to kiss you all over,
Tell you how much I missed you,
Even though I only saw you yesterday.
I know relationships are hard,
And I know we'll have to get over the bumps in the road,
But this is so worth it,
Never let me go...
Now you see,
If every person,
Of every country,
In all the world,
Had just a little of what we had....
Don't you think the world would be a nicer place to live?
Author notes
Option six - Love can't change what's wrong in the world. But it's a start.
Love you baby... <3 Lewis!
A contest entry
- "My greatest hopes and fears are centered around you." by Perfectly Imperfect.
450 points, ended February 20, 2008, 19 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I hope it's good enough.
Comments
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This is great, exactly the kind of piece I was hoping to read
I really like what you too from the prompt.
"I often think of what I was like before I met you,
And I think it's safe to say,
I wouldn't be here if you hadn't come along."
I love those lines, I can relate so much Well done and thank you for your entry x
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That's really good emily
best of luck in the contest!
xxx
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