i miss you
yet you haven't left
you broke my heart
without one word
you told me you were leaving
you told me it'd be ok
did you expect me not to care?
cause baby, i do.
for so long you've been near
i've had nothing to fear
but now your leaving
why does it hurt so much?
worried now
you'll not be there
who'll protect me
who'll love me here?
i know this
may sound selfish
but baby, i cant help it
i want you not to go
i love you too much
don't you know?
Author notes
this is for the guy i love. hes going to jobcore in march. i know it sounds like a long time to some people but when its really your life, it goes by so fast! i already miss him, yet he hasnt left yet, and hes at my house everyday. love SUCKS
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Heartache seem to bring the best out in a poet, ya know it?
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The heart break breathes through your words beautiful. Its lamenting and simple but stunning through out.
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