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Love's Divinity

Love's divinity
Hearts melting universally
merging in unison
binding infinitely
entwining soul
Breathing passion's breath
celestial and earth forever 

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Artist is: Melonie Weidner
Picture Title: "Between Us"
Website to other beautiful pictures: http://www.listenforjoy.com/prints.html

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 6, 2008

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    Humm ...you are very sweet while showing the sketch of life through the scenario of the love..wonderful indeed..a great poem ...


  • Karl Weiss - Topaz gold member
    March 1, 2008
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    Nice

    I like this piece descriptive and well put together. Looks like a good one for comp.


  • MjM
    January 17, 2008

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    Its pretty,like awet sadness in some way.Hearts melting universally made me think of abig globe twisted and being wrung out like a towel.Dripping heart liquid ,its agood one.


  • delightfulmess silver member
    January 17, 2008

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    I love the line "Breathing Passions Breath."
    Well done and thank you for entering my contest.


    Delila

  • Climbing2nothing
    January 17, 2008

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    Breathing passion's breath
    celestial and earth forever

    This is beautiful, i liked the stop, flow, stop rhythm, worked a wonder to the knowledge it paints as above so below for true magic is love and life is the spell, thanks for sharing and good luckK, surely a coin and a well,

    W pan fried smoked salmon, steamed asparagus, sweet potato mash and a glass of shiraz
    -jas

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