You are always trying to breath deeper,
as you stuff your memories between old records.
Craving something more, more air.
Author notes
Prompt: http://i8.tinypic.com/6t3yhcz.jpg
"Breathe" by Melonie Weidner
A contest entry
- 20 words only #3 by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended January 18, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i should have known something from you in this contest would have placed
very nicely done sweetie
congrats on the HM. be well and be blessed


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Ohhh I like this original take on the pic.


Love it! Thank you for entering my contest. 


Delila

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Thank yooou!
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