I do not wish to day reside
Where all is seen and none can hide
Instead I find dark sanctity
Where I see none and none see me
There is no light I'd find in day
To overcome my seen dismay
And no one else to share my dream
Of darkness guarded by esteem
Once a day a morning wakes
When I remember my mistakes
In waiting for the violent sun
I lost my shadow's precious none
A contest entry
- Prewrite Fiesta! - For my Favourites - by Never Fall in Love.
1250 points, ended March 13, 2008, 27 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is brilliant. You should be writing more often, your flow is always great. The 3rd and 4th lines are amazing - and the title is captivating as well
Never ♥
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Wow, this is amazing brother...
Your sis is here for you 
It's really pretty in both ways, well written and flow-y, and then sad too...
luv Nadine xxx
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heh, 'flow-y'.. a lovely word ^^ thanks
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Of course flowy is a word! what other word could i have used???
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wow.....you did a great job with a nice smooth rhyme. The feeling you wrote of is one I think many can relate to. Amazing write
lUvS
~broken~
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