Your eloquent smile always win
And brings me back to sin
So enter my heart and set me free
Cause I bound myself to thee
Take away my pain and fear
Say the words I want to hear
Hold me like you really care
You know the love we share
It cannot be compare
It is forever rare
So whisper in my ear
And let me feel you near
Kiss my crimson lips
Move your finger tips
Touch my soft skin
Bring my passions from deep within
Show me you're the one
Who makes my life go on
Always keep nearby
And give me wings to fly
Be my shining armor in the night
And the beauty of morning light
Hold me close and squeeze me tight
Never give up the fight
Our love illuminate bright
Cause we love with all our might
Please tell me what you think
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Ah..your emotions are very true and very natural while spkeaing the story of the love ...just wonderful work you did my friend..and thanks for sharing..
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Good job on this, nice piece, but I must say the contrast between the background color and the text are a bit blinding lol, keep up the good work ~Bret~
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thanks for sharing.... well written well express... well done
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beautiful
Hello There,
I have just finished reading your poem, and would like to tell you just how much i have enjoyed the read.I found your write to be written tastefully and the visions your words have given to the reader are beautifully sensual.The reader can feel your love and devotion as well as being able to see the story that you have penned within their mind.I really love the last few lines.....
Be my shining armor in the night
And the beauty of morning light
Hold me close and squeeze me tight
Never give up the fight
Our love illuminate bright
Cause we love with all out might
they say so much.
Take care and keep up the great writting.
~Whispers~
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"Enter my heart and set me free
Cause I bound myself to thee
Take away my pain and fear
And say the words I want to hear" this is so touching.
You have a few spelling errors in line (5) it says my instead of me, (16)make where it should be makes and line (24) it should be our not out.
Over all this is a wonderful write and has a beautiful flow thank you for sharing -
well I have entered. well put, well done. very sweet and gooshy, you just want to crawl up and fall asleep.
Nice pink choice by the way,
creatress
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