Years after years love remain a matter
Within the diary, between two hearts
Among the most crowded place
Loneliness captured.
I live in love
I inhale it
In love I dwell
In love I suffocate.
Author notes
Weird, hah?
it's a piece by love, in love, and of love.
A contest entry
- Pimp up my love poetry by leander.
700 points, ended February 22, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 7 of 7
-
Hmm, this is short what you have written here, but quite interesting actually.
I like the way you played with words - being close to an oxymoron to each other (love and suffocate for example). Good use of metaphoric device.
One little oopsie in line 1: remain -> remains?
Thank you for entering the contest, I wish you the best of luck!
Leander -
Thanks.
-
such simple and delicate words...the last four lines are golden...great job!
-
Thanks Del20 Gustafson, your comment is really inspirational
-
Thanks a lot nil pori
-
dear, its a nice poem, i can realize ur condition here.
-
Beautiful
It has a mystic, haunting quanity to it.
Adding your comment:
1 - 7 of 7
