When I look into your eyes
By Charles Marks
When I look into your eyes
I see a angel who was good to me
A happy soul now crushed because of me
I'm sorry for what has been done
I'm sorry for being a jack in a box
I'm sorry for the hurt i cause
When I look into your eyes
I see beauty who i used to have
I'm hoping to re-have one day soon
And to show you a man not a boy
I'm sorry for me
I'm sorry for all the tears you dropped
When I look into your eyes
I see a piece of me,gone for the moment
A moment too long,wondering how long
And I feel like a ding-dong
I'm sorry for it all
I'm sorry for your empty heart.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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nice
i feel quite sorry for the person into whose eyes u are looking at... -
That just made me sad
I like how you organized the stanzas, very nice.
"And I feel like a ding-dong" was my favorite line, haha.
Well, great write. Much love. Keep it up.
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