The needle went in,
The needle came out.
With his eyes and mouth wired,
He couldn't shout.
The tower of power,
Rides him until he's limp.
He asked me my name.
"I'm Willie the Pimp."
I like to fuck trees,
Watch dicks being cut off,
I was a physician,
And loved when men coughed.
Let's face it - I'm fucked up,
I've wasted my life.
If you asked me why?
I'd blame it on my wife.
Author notes
Totally just for the contest. Wanted to see what I could do.
A contest entry
- Deeply Disturb Me by xxRainbowDawnxx.
450 points, ended January 20, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be brutaly honest.
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hahahaha
very funny.....what a way to put words loool the part when you blamed the wife was quite funny...poor wife
juliet
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Hehe...that made me laugh. Is he some executioner or something speaking to a prisoner? sounds like it to me. Likes watching dicks getting chopped of and fucking trees, great stuffs, makes me laugh. I need my head sorted out, me thinks.
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Nice one
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I liked it. Some of the imagery was gross, which I think is superb! I love the way you ended it...made me laugh. Very well penned. Best of luck with it in the contest
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enjoy that! I like to fuck trees, watch dicks being cut off - great lines. tells you so much about the character
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